Aloha! I appreciate your willingness to trudge through the first draft and help me improve the story. Even though it’s a rough draft, I hope you still find it enjoyable and relatable.

I’ll do my best to release chapters regularly, like a television series, so you won’t lose interest. Also, I look forward to hearing your first impressions and learning things like:

• What part of the chapter do you remember most?
• When did the story seem to drag on?
• Did anything in the story confuse you?
• Which character do you most relate to and why?
• What makes you want to keep reading? (Or stop reading?)

Mahalo! -cj